read part 1 here
nnnnng just thinking about posting the mall pages tomorrow is giving me consumerism PTSD. It’ll be anti-climatic for you readers but I’m already getting jittery hands and a sweaty butthole from the anticipation of reliving those terrible, immeasurable moments. Immeasurable because I dont know if I was lost in the mall for 10 minutes or 3 hours. Either way, I emerged a changed woman. Probs for the worse.
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Ooh, careful, cell #8 has an extra word in the dialog bubble.
(Forgive my ignorance of correct comic vocabulary)
“You’re going to the mall after AND what Brian just told you?”
fixed. thanks for catching it!
I was laughing hysterically at the third from the last panel, but the panel after that made me just start repeating the words “oh no” out loud. I’m still saying it.
Funny! Well written. I could tell from the dialog that you were “…high as balls”, before it was said. When I was reading the 7th panel, I was asking myself, “Is she stoned or what?” Then in the 8th, “Ding, ding, ding, we have a winner!”
I’m looking forward to the next page!
My brother lives right by that mall. I ain’t been inside cuz, y’know, why would I, but it sure is helping me mentally set the scene for what follows.
In other news, obligatory dumbness follows.
THERAPIST: But how does your sweaty butthole make you FEEL?
P.S. That’s quite a douche-y roommate thar.
Hm, are balls high? I’d tend to think of them as low, and tits as high.
Other than that, I’m having fun … really enjoy the dialogue.